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Going to a Picture Book Revision Retreat

1/31/2017

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Last weekend I went to a writers' retreat hosted by one of my favorite authors, Michelle Houts.  This is Michelle with her newest book, When Grandma Gatewood Took a Hike.  When you go to a writing retreat, you also do a lot of reading, and I love to read!
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Michelle used "Writing Picture Books" as our textbook.  We looked at it chapter by chapter and then applied it to our own manuscripts.  Staying at a Bed and Breakfast meant we could spread out and get comfortable.  I love being comfortable!  In one activity, we highlighted our story characters, one color for each character.  It was an eye-opener!  I discovered I had too many characters.  It’s an easy fix...eliminate a couple of characters.  Other eye-openers will take much longer.
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Sometimes we did an activity and had a classmate repeat it.  It was interesting to see where our answers matched, but even more interesting to find differences.  This is where I learned the most, and can improve the most too.  I love improving, hopefully enough to see this picture book published!
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Here are two class pictures from Michelle Houts’ Picture Book Revision Retreat, January 2017, where learning is a lot of fun!
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christy
2/1/2017 05:13:55 am

Wow Rinda! It looked as if you had a wonderful retreat! My third graders enjoyed reading about it! They also LOVED their pictures on your site! That was awesome for them to see and reflect back to that day!! Thank you again for coming to Valley View!!! We welcome you back at anytime!

Third Grade Students at Valley View Elementary

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